Have your editing partner, who should write 'reviewed by' and their name at the top, review your paper for the following:
1. Examine the definition in the essay. Do you understand it? Does it need clarification? Comment on the definition.
2. Examine the dream v. reality explanation. Does this make sense? Can you argue against their explanation? Pose questions to point out weaknesses in argument.
3. Examine the example dream provided. Do they concisely describe the dream, but still use interesting language to engage the reader? Could they clarify or condense description in places? Provide commentary to aid this.
4. Does the essay show thoughtful paragraphing? Could more/different paragraph structuring be suggested?
5. Examine the essay for GUM issues. Use proofreader marks.
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